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Old 04-09-2008, 01:55 PM
Jack M. Jack M. is offline
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"I wish that I was a writer or a poet to try to represent the four days we had on Hazel Creek...."

Take this constructively, please. Reading of trips is one of the delights of the forum, particularly for those of us too far to make it to the Park often. PICTURES always improve the stories. As they say, they are worth a thousand words.

But another thing that greatly helps readability is using a new paragraph now and then. If you pause to think of what you are going to say next, consider hitting the return button twice.

Great story, though, and thanks for sharing.
Please bear in mind that I have no idea what I am talking about.
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